Please report any script related errors here. (Spelling, grammar, etc.)

If you find any misspelling, grammatical errors, weird English usage, or even some weird characters like @@ or weird texts like HazukiKun1234567, please report them here.

You can download the English and Japanese scripts from the attachments at the bottom of this page;

http://sites.google.com/site/tokimemogs1/translation-checking-guide

and report the errors using the format in that page, or you can just write down what you found.

For example;

miruki said...

Also, when talking to Kei about why he models, there's a broken line break. You see the @@ but the text stays in that line and goes off screen.

(Note: @@ is a code for line break. I'll try to write a program to double check that it is placed correctly in the scripts later. ^_^" - Jewel)

Please report any errors/bugs (not spellings or grammar) here

If you have played the test version and find anything wrong, please report here. This thread will be for graphics, game errors, weird effects, or anything that are not related to the scripts (grammar, misspelling, etc.)

For example;

The Color Pencil Colorist said...

Dunno if alot of people will run into this like I did but when you're inputting your last name to give it a sound and you decide to go back and forth between the last name and first name part out of pure indecisiveness like me, at one point when I hit the back button the romajisized alphabet reverted to japanese for like a second. I don't think alot of people will run into that like I did but I had to mention it.

Another thing I noticed was when changing outfits the pants were centered and the shirts kinda winded up to the right. Very much unlike the way the default outfit is centered. Not sure if its something in the original rom or if its something in specific to my acekard.

[For testers] Test Report (Tokimemo1Test-20100126-2.patch)

Download the patch and read more info here.

This patch is also an optional test and it is very likely that the patched file will not work on flashcart. You don't have to try it. But in case you try, please report your test result in this post's comment.

Thank you.

Preliminary Test Report
Editor's Name: .......................

Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................

Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................

Any problem playing the patched ROM on your device? (Yes/No):
..........................
If Yes, please explain problem(s):
..........................................................................

[For testers] Test Report (Tokimemo1Test-20100126.patch)

Download the patch and read more info here.

This patch is an optional test. You don't have to try it. But in case you try, please report your test result in this post's comment.

Thank you.

Preliminary Test Report
Editor's Name: .......................

Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................

(In case you tested the game on more than one card/emulator.)
Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................

Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................

Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................


Any problem playing the patched ROM on your device? (Yes/No):
..........................
If Yes, please explain problem(s):
..........................................................................

[For testers] Test Report (Tokimemo1Test-20100123.patch)

Preliminary Tests

Procedures: Open the patched rom and play it. (You can read patching tutorial here.) Try clicking different buttons. Try to save and load. Then restart and select different things. At this point, just check that the game won't crash. No need to check the scripts yet.

After testing, please post your test result in the comment box. (In case you have problem posting your comment, you can email or pm Jewel instead.)


Preliminary Test Report
Editor's Name: .......................

Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................

(In case you tested the game on more than one card/emulator.)
Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................

Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................

Flash card or Emulator used for testing: ..............................
Flash card or Emulator version (optional): ...........................


Any problem playing the patched ROM on your device? (Yes/No):
..........................
If Yes, please explain problem(s):
..........................................................................

Opinion on Naming System

Procedures: If you don't have problem loading the patched game on your device, please continue playing. After naming your character, you will get to the preset events where you meet some guys and your first girl friend. You can try applying for different clubs or jobs to meet other friends. Also you can try to raise different parameters to meet different guys/girls. (You can restart your game from the beginning and choose different room in order to meet a different girlfriend.) Just play with it for a while and then post your opinion about the naming system here.

What naming system do you prefer? .....................
a. First name before Last name (Ex. Kei Hazuki.)
b. Last name before First name (Ex. Hazuki Kei.)
c. It doesn't make different to me.
d. (Others)............................................


That's all I need for this first patch testing. You can continue playing the game. Many parts of the scripts are already translated. You don't have to pay much attention to the spelling/grammar/etc. yet. We will focus on the editing after we finalize the naming system first. ^_^

Thank you so much. <3

Naming Issue

Here's what Jewel posted on the google project site: "Well, one of the editors and I have discussed about the naming system. At first, I planned to use Firstname-Lastname because Konami also used this system whenever the names are shown in English. (See "Kei Hazuki" in the picture below.) Anyway, the problem is your own name. I can't seem to find the code that shows your name on the screen. For now, every time you address yourself, it always goes as Lastname-Firstname. So I'm thinking maybe we should use Lastname-Firstname instead? And when the characters in the game introduce themselves, they always say Lastname-Firstname. Hmm...I think all the editors and game testers will need to focus on this issue and find a conclusion before we go to the next steps."

Project Overview: Tokimeki Memorial Girl's Side 1st Love Plus!

Project leader: Jewel
Translators: amzy, Jewel, ...etc
Editors: miruki, Maverynthia
Testers: 5hours, Aeladya, Alice, Ash, Capi, J Wu (Jia), Jei, miruki, orangedoll

Translation progess:

Hacking: ??%
Translation: 18%
Editing: ??%
Testing: ??%